Jan 10 2010

secret saturday 2: after the date

She locked the back door and heard the murmur of the television from the den. No voices, though, giving her hope, however faint, that the children were asleep. She tossed her coat across the table and kicked off her clogs.

“Hey.” Her husband appeared in the dining room arch, back lit from the den.

“Are the kids—”

“In bed,” he interrupted. “Asleep.”

“Wow. Did you drug ‘em?”

“I thought you’d be back by eight thirty.” His voice acquired that edge. She could tell he wouldn’t be babysitting again anytime soon.

“The train was delayed. We got stuck in the tunnel.”

He palmed the dimmer, and the chandelier blared alight. She squinted.

“The website didn’t say anything,” he said stiffly.

She shrugged. “I’m shattered. You coming to bed?” She asked, knowing that he wouldn’t. She asked for form’s sake, to maintain the illusion of civility. As she slouched past him, his hand snatched her above the elbow. “Hey!”

“You were with him, weren’t you?”

“Who?”

“You know who.  Wasn’t enough, I suppose, to flirt with him in the deli every day. To have drinks with him last Thursday from five to seven PM.”

“What the hell?”

“Oh, I don’t need to spy on you. Do you think everyone in this town doesn’t know everything. Do you think they wouldn’t tell me?”

“And what did the jungle drums report about tonight, then?” She wrenched her arm free, but still he blocked her path.

“I’m your husband. You owe me the truth at least.”

Something in his eyes, something she’d never seen before made her heart ricochet in her chest.

“What do you want to hear?”

“Everything.” He imprisoned her wrists in his hands. She couldn’t remember the last time she’d felt his palms there.

“Do you want to hear how he took my hand?”

“How? The little punk.”

She met his gaze. He released her wrists. She took one of his hands flat between both of hers, and then brushed one protruding finger against her lip. He inhaled.

“Did you let him kiss you?”

Again, the look she’d never seen. Jealousy, but something more. “I kissed him.”

“You what?”

She ran her hands up his arms, over his t-shirt, and into the line of his disheveled hair. Then she pulled his face down and kissed him—lips, breath, tongue, teeth—as they hadn’t kissed in—

“What else did he do, the bastard?”

She moved his hand under her blouse. “This.” The other hand she led round to the back of her skirt. “And this.”

He pulled her close, stiff against her. “What else? I could kill him.”

Some time later they went up to bed, exhausted, sore, sated. She felt a pang of guilt, but fleeting. He wouldn’t have minded about the truth, a drink too many with her college roommate after the play; but the illusory lover not only proved incandescent, but it also guaranteed he’d babysit again soon, willingly.


What is Secret Saturday? This piece was a little different than my usual fare. I suppose you can decide whether the change was for the good or the bad! My wildcard, like Emma Jane’s, was tunnel.

Check out the other excellent writers joining in this week:

  • Emma Jane – injecting a special verisimilitude to hers!

Jan 9 2010

secret saturday 2

Last week, the first round of Secret Saturday, was a great success because so many excellent writers accepted the challenge. May it be so again!

The challenge: write 250-500 words (fiction or non-fiction, who will know?) about a secret. Maybe your piece will reveal the secret. Maybe it won’t. Click on one of the three cards below to get your wildcard, which will be a person, place or thing for you to include in your story. You only get one pick, though, so you’ve got to take what you get.

Stories due before bedtime Sunday. Post your link in comments here or on Twitter @caseydamnmorgan. Have fun!


Jan 2 2010

new writing challenge: secret saturday

OK, kids, we have been idle long enough. The twelve days of Christmas have not yet passed (as Adele will attest), but by now we all ought to have recovered from our New Year’s hangovers. Thus, flushed with resolute zeal, here is a new writing game for comers new and old:

Write 250-500 words (fiction or non-fiction, who will know?) about a secret. Maybe your piece will reveal the secret. Maybe it won’t. Pick one of the three cards below (click on it) to get your wildcard, which will be a person, place or thing for you to include in your story. You only get one pick, though, so you’ve got to take what you get. Peeking at the other cards is cheating, kids, and we all know what that gets you. (Hint: whack-whack-whack)

Stories due before bedtime Sunday. Post your link in comments here or on Twitter @caseydamnmorgan. Have fun!